Your friend has decided to switch careers but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
Although some people are happy with their careers, others want to change their job due to some reason. In my points of views, Salary and mental satisfaction are the most two important elements cause this challenge of changing job.
Salary is one of the significant aspects we should consider in choosing a career. If people can not earn money that can run their life, they would not be comfortable to handle smoothly their duties. If my friend asks me to suggest the best career for him I should recommend that he should opt for a job which meets their minimum needs. For instance, my friend wanted to resign from his job and search new job because his work-time was very long and also the salary was very low. I suggested he should choose a company with a good salary Due to the fact that if his salary is good and he can run his life, he would be comfortable even the work-time was long.
In the second position, I believe that mental satisfaction is another important aspect of a career. Everybody is different from others. Some people can do something and be happy with it but others may be in trouble doing exactly those tasks. If I want to give advice to my friend to select a career I should consider his mental circumstances. For example, my friend had a job with good conditions, salary, and work-time. However, he was not satisfied because as I have known him he should do something challenging. His job was not challenging and he had to sit and manage the company. I suggested he should search for a job which can make him satisfied.
To conclude, If my friend asks me to advise to change his career, I will consider two important things, salary, and mental satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e in trouble doing exactly those tasks. If I want to give advice to my friend to s...
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Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: changing
...onclude, If my friend asks me to advise to change his career, I will consider two importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60396039604 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58527725106 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8636973764 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1875 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707683467604 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029559813339 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033591218717 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471820609359 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180967429735 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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