In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option ?
food is the basic need of human being. but now a days it seems like it's became a trend to eat fast food. because of that many countries reported that they notice drastically increase in patient who are suffered from eating too much junk food. Although it became necessary to increase tax for that type of food. Obviously at some extent I agree with that. On the other hand some reasons are dragging for disagreement.
To begin with, fast food is that type of food, which made easily and take less time for preparing. As well as, it no need so much ingredient and in addition it's test and smell good. so many people who are very busy in daily schedule they should preffered to eat fast food. At the same time people are not aware from it's drawback. Likewise people may get suffered from health problem because of eating fast food too much. Besides government take action on it and impose higher tax on fast food with hope that people should avoid to eat that type of foods.
Oppositely, impose higher tax on fast food draw a nagative effect on many middle class people, they might be not able to spent sufficient amount of money on food because of higher tax. may be some time they not eat anything all the day. so government should consedar that people and then they may implement tax on fast food.
In conclusion, it is clear that for batter health of people government should impose higher tax. but at an certain limit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, likewise, may, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54826254826 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19391331104 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1409483895 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2941176471 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458969562732 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150881617575 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850353246799 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285045090591 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672563741461 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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