It has been well acknowledged that finding a dream job is now increasingly difficult for most of the people in today’s society. While some people think they should take a secure job as soon as they find it, others tend to wait for a job that would be more satisfying since the high-rocketed speed of our economy create an illusion for them. In my opinion I can’t share the same cup of tea with the latter.
First and the foremost, having a stable salary is the most important thing to do for anyone who wants to live a happy life in current world. To be more specific, if you don’t have a secure income in the beginning, you can’t move next step, you need money to buy food, to rent a house a car or something else, and teenager should get economy independence as quickly as possible when they step into the society. Having such a relatively stable life is the prerequisite before you can have a next step. A tower without a stab foundation won’t be realistic.
Foremost, the fact that a majority of the nice job now entails employees to have some sophisticate experience indicates that having a secure job is a reasonable choice at the first stage. To have such a job doesn’t mean that you have to stick on it permanently, on the contrary, it will help you to pave the way for your dream jobs. Just take my brother as a perfect example, he used to work in a small company after graduating from college with low salary, however he didn’t want to take this job as the end of his life trip. What happened is he actually accumulated enormous valuable working experience there and finally found another job at Microsoft which is always been his dream. Had it not been for him to take a secure job in the beginning, he wouldn’t have the opportunity to go further and eventually reach his dream.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that secure job will wither the enthusiasm of individuals and inhibit them from a better life, ironically the real fact is that these secure jobs can actually stimulate people to strive for a better job. Given that when people find their jobs only provide lower reward than others, they will start to try to improve themselves and find more opportunities or even start a business by their own.
In a nutshell, I maintain that people should take a secure job right away when they find it as far as economy independence, future career success and self-improvement are concerned, and I believe the opponents will compromise after being exposed to my article.
- TPO 36-Independent- For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do you agree or disagree?because modern life is complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organization. 80
- The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 71
- TPO 25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6981981982 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77211174422 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538288288288 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9442787092 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.066666667 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364268376586 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118237672392 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665444551944 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199668157693 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336830892293 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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