Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
A society's success may be measured by various standards. Historically, the overall success of the community may be essential than the pleasant lives of it's people. However, a grandiose city may compromise the well-being of it's people and also, it is the legislator's obligation to develop the city in such a way.
Admittedly, prominent cities of the history are the ones that presented great prowess and development. The districts that were ahead of their time by utilizing unprecedented technology or by constructing great monuments were recorded by history and is reminisced by the humans until now. For instance, Rome was able to leave a mark in history because of the various technology it utilized in their cities: the aquaducts, public bathrooms, the Colloseum, and much more was a source of admiration that enabled them to be written in history books. Hence, for a city to be remembered as a epitome of success through human history it would be important to be successful as a whole.
Nevertheless, these successes may entail a sacrifice from their people. Monuments or amenities are sometimes built with the compromise of the people's labor or health and thus may lead a strong resistive force. For instance, in ancient Egypt pharaohs built the pyramids to symbolize their eminence and power. Even though the city is a major attraction for historians and numerous tourists, it demanded countless sacrifice of the Egyptians to build the artifact and as the King's power debilitated, the resistance of the public grew into a resistance that contributed to the failure of Egypt. Consequently, the successful society may be a false virtue in that is may hamper with the happiness of it's people which might result in a instigation.
Last but not least, it is the government's obligation to enhance the people's rights and good living. Impending problems such as unemployment or poverty are such a important issue that it should not be ignored by the legislators and their focus in constructing a propitious society. For instance, government officials should fund districts that are suffering from destitute rather than investing in sports complexes in or to facilitate the Olympics like the Chinese government did in 2008. To build massive sporting facilities, they invested a significant part of their budget in these buildings which had noxious effects to the economy and exacerbated poverty among the public. Even though they successfully finished the Olympics, their society would be hard to be assessed as successfull due to the rampant poverty.
In conclusion, the leaders should not only focus on the districts historical values because it entails costs payed by the people. Rather, it would be better to focus on their current status and solve impending problems first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'legislators'' or 'legislator's'?
Suggestion: legislators'; legislator's
...being of its people and also, it is the legislators obligation to develop the city in such ...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Hence, for a city to be remembered as a epitome of success through human histor...
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Line 9, column 727, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ess of its people which might result in a instigation. Last but not least, i...
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Line 13, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ion. Last but not least, it is the governments obligation to enhance the peoples right...
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Line 13, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...uch as unemployment or poverty are such a important issue that it should not be i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95990990854 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502222222222 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7716874172 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.631578947 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231533695854 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794295269196 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872698177851 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139244516509 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949874927816 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.