Today, more and more people choose to live by themselves. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?
In the process of urbanization, the family structure underwent unprecedented changes. The inclination of living alone is increasing. Both economic and social changes have caused the trend.
The first reason comes from the family structure change due to population migration. In the past decade, young people left hometowns and swarmed into the metropolis to pursue unparalleled job opportunities here. Since most of them left the elders at home, if they don't get married, they would live alone.
Women's participation in the labor market, which made them self-sufficient, reinforced the trend. The change that they no longer depended so much on the husbands as they do in traditional families gave them considerable freedom in life. Besides, the development of feminism liberated their self-consciousness. More and more women choose to divorce from an unsatisfied marriage or stay single until they find the right person.
From the perspective of liberalism, this is a triumph. People have sufficient freedom to choose between marriage and single life as long as they are capable of taking care of themselves. However, single life can be vulnerable. A life partner is the most crucial support for adults. In the traditional family, when people need help or someone to talk to, they can always rely on their life partners. But now, they have to deal with stresses and strains all alone. Friends may be helpful, but friends can hardly take the role of a family member.
In conclusion, population migration and women's independence are the main reasons why people choose to live alone. It's an advance in terms of freedom, but it could also make life hard for the single.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22140221402 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92414412506 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4857118316 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4736842105 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146224461602 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395729400323 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493092944623 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709238116167 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208003957275 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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