You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item.
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Ahmed Karem, and I am a frequent traveller on your company trains. I would like to inform you about the loss of my bag on one of the trains, which is a valuable gift from my father.
On Thursday the 15th of January on train number 55 route B, heading from Cairo to Alexandria. When I was heading to work, I had a phone call which distracted me; I probably left the bag on seat number 45C. It was a black leather bag with a silver belt, it holds my personal laptop, and my wallet which includes my credit card and valuable items.
I would be grateful, if you could help me in finding my bag by taking the required action in such cases. I also request to contact the Railway staff, who were on duty during that time; moreover, hanging a notice with the bag’s descriptions would be useful.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance. Should there be any queries, please contact me on 95782521 or via mail: ahmedkarem55@gmail.com.
Faithfully yours,
Ahmed Karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51871657754 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72734920397 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652406417112 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.145738791 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130271287044 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534248757133 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546430213829 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849259133826 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321641193725 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.