Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television, however , television cannot replace the book as a learning tool ,which is why children are less well.educated today .to waist extent do you agree or disagree .

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... spend a lot of time watching television ,while,television cannot take a place of ...
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...ke a place of book for learning material .Thesedays,children are less well - educa...
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...enhance their vocabulary with television .I would discuss these in the upcoming pa...
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... ,when children watch television program ,sometime,crime show and action scenes ar...
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...ed their mind and create negative effect ,which is not good for their future .More...
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...fect ,which is not good for their future .Moreover,children pay their attension on...
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...cannot enhance their communication skill . Taking the case of India , few children...
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...ication skill . Taking the case of India , few children belong to affluent family ...
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... because of television programmes. Further discussing the same, when they w...
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...skill because when people read the books ,they only pay their attention on book bu...
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...their attention on audio and pictures so,due to this, they cannot increase their con...
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...cannot increase their concentrates skill .Apart from this,when children spend thei...
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...heir concentrates skill .Apart from this,when children spend their time on television...
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...n anything because of audio and pictures .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48510638298 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0083986284 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.722378357 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.833333333 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248568540543 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143090470372 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055969805784 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175444572929 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318390494313 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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