Dear Committee,
I am writing this letter to address the plan of constructing a new swimming pool in my area. On behalf of 5th block of the society, I am volunteering to convey the decision to you. We have agreed on the location of the pool which is going to be in the centre of the town instead outside the town.
Firstly, I would like to appreciate the committee for taking such great initiatives which motivates the society members and excites the children.
In my opinion, Introducing a pool is going to advantage our health situation. Swimming on daily basis is going to increase our heart rate and we will feel more flexible at end of the day which is really important for a sound sleep and allows us to maintain a good life balance.
The strategy behind choosing the location which is centre of the town is that all the society members always have a pleasure to look at the pool from their windows which give all the building members a nicer view. And another reason is centre area comes under northeast direction which will keep swimming pool cool in the summer and hot in the winter. So there will be a less maintenance cost of the pool.
I would like to add that there were a huge disagreement by the society not choosing the place which is outside of the town. The main reason behind is the express highway which is located at the outskirt and placing a swimming pool there can be dangerous for the members. Because crossing the highway in anytime of the day is next to impossible and everybody of us avoid to go to that part of area.
We request you to establish the swimming pool in the centre of the town not the outside the town.
Many Thanks,
Shahin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 365, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid going', 'avoid gonna'.
Suggestion: avoid going; avoid gonna
... next to impossible and everybody of us avoid to go to that part of area. We request you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, really, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 306.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51960784314 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44188508496 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6547776027 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284231744578 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103181897486 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102712309296 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161810859151 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118747016712 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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