TPO.26
I am completely disagreed with this statement. I think, children must do what they want and do what they love it and interested about that job. this is not true that children have abilities that their parents have, because, generally children are better than their parents and they have more and better abilities than their parents have. besides some job that parents had, today are very different, for example, today farming will not do like the past. I believe, it is important, the job that some ones do, be their favorite and they enjoy from that because if the person do not like her or his job, he or she will never be successful in that job and always will do that job by unwilling also that job will be so boring for him or her. in other hand if some ones love to own jobs, they will be very successful in that job and they will enjoy from that job. in different times, people have different interesting so our interesting may be so different than our parents. in the past children did their parents' job because in that time there was limited profession jobs or there was not demand for some job because any one did not need those works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... love it and interested about that job. this is not true that children have abilitie...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...tter abilities than their parents have. besides some job that parents had, today are ve...
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Line 1, column 653, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'do'.
Suggestion: will always do
...ill never be successful in that job and always will do that job by unwilling also that job wil...
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Line 1, column 738, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...t job will be so boring for him or her. in other hand if some ones love to own job...
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Line 1, column 859, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... job and they will enjoy from that job. in different times, people have different ...
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Line 1, column 952, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... so our interesting may be so different than our parents. in the past children did t...
^^^^
Line 1, column 970, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...g may be so different than our parents. in the past children did their parents job...
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Line 1, column 970, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g may be so different than our parents. in the past children did their parents job...
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Line 1, column 1113, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ere was not demand for some job because any one did not need those works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45971563981 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23262491305 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.247252692 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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