Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Teaching cooking in school is often a debated issue. some say cooking is a crucial skill and should be taught to kids in school and some say it is not necessary. this essay shall discuss both perspectives. I, however, side with the later view.
To begin with, childrens nowadays are already burdened with so many academic subject. And if cooking is added as a subject it will be a add on stress on them. moreover, age of the kids is not appropriate to learn such skills, to work with sharp knifes and hot utensils could be dangerous for them. school need extra resources, infrastructure and specialised teachers to accommodate cooking as a subject. Hence, it will affect school budget on a very large-scale as well.
Digging deeper, cooking is a practical knowledge there is not much theories related to it. it will be hard for school to instill this skill in kids. cooking is a something that someone learns while doing it on daily basis. Not all kids are same, some will find this boring too. For example, according to a survey, more than 70 % of the people started cooking in their early twenties, this indicates that its to early for kids to learn cooking at school.
On the other hand, there is increasing number of nuclear families, and both parents are working. kids should know cooking, so that they can cook for themselves, if no one is available at home to cook for them. moreover, kids who wish to choose chef as their career, will get immense help by learning basic cooking skills at school.
To summarise, there is no deny that cooking is an essential life skill, but it will not be a wise decision to make it a compulsory subject in school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71525423729 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52702476875 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3360200753 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216659062999 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703249496788 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479826430422 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141011440784 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530223000923 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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