Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several davs— say you are sorry— explain the situation with transportation— give suggestions of how you intend to fix it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to explain and apologize for the delays at work for few days. I know follow uniformity and decorum is necessary in the office. Fixing office check in and out time plays significant role as it helps to make worklife balance in individuals life.

Firstly, I would like to tell you that I took local conveyance to come to the work but Atal transportation Company Limited who serves the region is changing the buses schedule on continuos basis which hampers my timing to work.

Moreover, I decided to leave home before 15 minutes to the daily schedule so that I can reach workplace on time. Finally, I again apologize for my late coming.

I look forward to regret the same.

Yours Sincerely,
Amrit Kour

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to explain and ...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'continuos'' or 'continuo's'?
Suggestion: continuos'; continuo's
...egion is changing the buses schedule on continuos basis which hampers my timing to work. ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., I again apologize for my late coming. I look forward to regret the same. ...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to regret the same. Yours Sincerely, Amrit Kour
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o regret the same. Yours Sincerely, Amrit Kour
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 622.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 130.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78461538462 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56720325342 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738461538462 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6068271732 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195888883713 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619819499629 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726632913524 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807418009305 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595727808033 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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