The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided bar chart represents an overview of the production and consumption of electricity in top ten countries in2014. The units are measured in kWH.
Overall, it is clearly seen that China and United States were the highest amount of energy produced and consumed; whereas, Korea was the least of position. The ratio of production and consumption was equilibrium in Russia and Korea, while Japan, India, France and Brazil produced higher electricity rather than consumed.
In 2014, China was a significant amount of electric energy consumed and produced compared to the other nine countries and it was almost 5,300 and 5,400 respectively. Subsequently, United States used and produced nearly 3,900 and 4,100 respectively.
On the other hand, Korea had the lowest position in the production and consumption of electricity and ratio of both segments were equal and their were approximately 450; nonetheless, similar ratio followed by Russia and it was 1,050. In contrast, the production of electric energy was higher compared to consumption in Japan, Brazil, India and France; it was nearly 940, 530, 875 and 565 respectively. <br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a significant amount of electric energy consumed and produced compared to the ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37430167598 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92285035741 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6714834212 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143170427319 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717257576016 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839092266147 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110195241519 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773106874411 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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