read a passage about an academic topic for 3 minutes, and then you will
hear a short lecture related to the topic. Then summarize the
points in the lecture and explain how they relate to specific points in the reading
passage
Both, the reading and the lecture discuss the reason for the birds’ deaths disaster. The reading states that the illegal fireworks caused damage for the birds by killing them and make them lose their habitats.
However, the lecture refutes the belief presented in the reading by sating that the fireworks using just to flush the birds not for killing them.
To begin with, the passage claims that there is a connection between the two events. This is because the time of each event is the same at 10 pm when the people heard high loud noises (the illegal fireworks), then they looked out their houses and watched the blackbirds hitting the cars, windows and shrubs also fall on everywhere.
Nevertheless, the lecture contrasts this idea by pointing out that there is a long distance between the place where the birds died and the city where the fireworks went off. Furthermore, there were numerous birds threw a long area which means the noises impacted on a part of them not all of them.
Secondly, the reading mentions that the birds were died by physical trauma, that’s what the scientists said after tested their bodies. As the result found, the birds had a trauma to the chest, hemorrhaging in the body cavity, bruised skulls, and blood clots.
Yet, the lecture challenges this argument by revealing that the birds' deaths and their bodies hurt may have been caused by the huge winds; according to what the people who watched the birds crushed by the wind and died said. Yet, the hurricanes in Arkansas killed seven people in the same place, also the storm might have made the birds lose their sense of direction or one of them led the group to fall fatally.
Lastly, the reading argues that the blackbirds were scared and left their roost, because of the fireworks. Since they unusually fly at night, and their poor eyesight with the confusion caused the crash; because they had to fly away from the noises, so that made them nearly to the roofs and buildings.
On the other hand, the lecture rebuts this theory by explaining that the birds’ poor vision increases the possibility to die at the beginning of their life. She asserts that the birds also fly at night, because there is no enough time in winter’s day. So they were gathered to move as every winter season, but unfortunately, during their flying, they died as many accepted because of their poor eyesight.
Thus, there is a stark difference between the reading and the lecture.
- read a passage about an academic topic for 3 minutes and then you will hear a short lecture related to the topic Then summarize the points in the lecture and explain how they relate to specific points in the reading passage 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television has destroyed communication among friends and family Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 424.0 270.72406181 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80660377358 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28998139161 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 145.348785872 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 419.366225166 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1137636862 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.882352941 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.09492273731 220% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 4.45695364238 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123054296657 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477418896245 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393206363716 0.0662205650399 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063505059612 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332960948979 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.