In the wake of modernization,people have started to ignore human relations and sympathetic feelings. This has led to incorporation of gratuitous community service as a mandatory high school programme. I believe this step will be benefit the students in various aspects of their lives, thus bettering our future.
In this era, people have made wealth as their lives sole objective. Unpaid service programmes will help students develop a sense of community in themselves. For instance, these will help students to do good for the people without having any monetary objective. Having done community se...
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I believe this step will be benefit the students in various aspects
I believe this step will benefit the students in various aspects
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