People living in the city are under huge pressure when they are living in a large city. Some cities look like New York City and make people feel very nervous. They are always hurrying in the street. But I disagree with the government encouraging people to move to regional towns. There are so many reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, there is some pressure living in a large city, but the wages are higher in large cities than in regional towns. Their pressure is a reasonable cost. It is more comfortable in towns. Too many people prefer higher waves. Although the prices might also be higher than towns, people always ignore this point. For example, too many Chinese go abroad and always choose large cities such as New York City, Los Angeles or London, even if in China they more like go to Shanghai. The large cities also means developed and more marks.
Secondly, people always know if they move to regional towns their life will be easier. When you give them a choice they also choose living in large cities. My best friend thinks it is boring if she is living in a regional town. There are more work opportunities in large cities, because many large companies are in large cities not towns. Only for work, people prefer to stay in large cities than towns. Usually when people retire and have more money, they are more likely to move to regional towns. If the government encourages people to move to regional towns, it will not have any effect.
To sum up, although people always feel the pressure, they prefer living in large cities when they think it from their realization. The government should not encourage people to move to regional towns.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gional towns their life will be easier. When you give them a choice they also choose...
^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...you give them a choice they also choose living in large cities. My best friend thinks ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68707482993 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20646339775 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9809950084 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.619047619 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357459301976 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132544286587 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920018244235 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27533197324 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617822679374 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gional towns their life will be easier. When you give them a choice they also choose...
^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...you give them a choice they also choose living in large cities. My best friend thinks ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68707482993 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20646339775 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9809950084 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.619047619 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357459301976 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132544286587 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920018244235 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27533197324 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617822679374 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.