Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that school is the place when numbers of student learn new thing about their life.Some people concur that school have to be more funniest and entertaining.While other group of thinkers argue that the main responsibility or purpose of school is to education.Actually both has it is own pros and cons.i quibble from them and propound that schools should do their actually activities.In this essay i shall discuss about what kind of sole activities should school do.
On the one hand,Adequate evidences are obtainable to substitute the concept of what actual activities should perform by school with their students.The top-notch concur is school is the temple of education.in todays modern life some of school perform several activities by their school students.for example, the first and foremost purpose is eduction, playing natural out door games, learn new things regarding life etc.as a result students gain some thing during their school period. Moreover, another rationale which hauls me to patron is tution period are require for children.this days some schools are orgainising classess. Consequently, student have a time for study.
On the other hand, Life is like a coin.Pleasure and plain two side of coin.one can visisble at thet time. So the public in general tend to contend that, the argue by someone is school should have to be more entertaining. Certainly, but once in a week they should give permission for student to be freely. On the contrary, school should perform both activities at that time.
In conclution,i reiterate that there are innumerable strong factor supporting to school should perform both activities like education and at that time playing Games.However,opposite factore can be neglecte.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, in general, kind of, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35842293907 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14992389258 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.381385474 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.111111111 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210717607537 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801293451056 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548331924531 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128659203309 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469997746461 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.