Many people have higher education now, more people who are than bachelor than before. In my city, i find poor people always get married earlier and prefer have children. But people who have doctorate degrees rarely have children. This is a true fact, this is why Japan, China and some other countries are entering an aging society. There are so many reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, there are some explains about why many people who are educated decided to have children in their later age. They think work is better than have a children. When they have higher salaries, and their education level also higher, they will want to have children at later age. They worried they have not more money to burden the tuition and living expenses for children. For some poor people, they want to have more children and make these children to help them work. Such as my grand-grandparents, they have eight children and very poor. My grandparents have three children and now, my mother and me always do not want a children in the later age. In my view, children are a burden. We must be responsible for them. Only when I can bring them happiness and better education can I have children.
Secondly, from some reasons of history, people went through World War I and World War II, these experiences make most of people poverty and most of poor people choose earlier have children. Children need to help adults do farm work. We are living a peace age, most of people have higher degrees and people live longer than before.
To sum up, people living standard and the life expectancies than before. These are some decision factors make more people decided to have children in their later age than it in the past.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... than bachelor than before. In my city, i find poor people always get married ear...
^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ge. They think work is better than have a children. When they have higher salaries, and th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 630, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ow, my mother and me always do not want a children in the later age. In my view, children ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...nd World War II, these experiences make most of people poverty and most of poor people choose ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...o farm work. We are living a peace age, most of people have higher degrees and people live lon...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70431893688 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34486546681 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461794019934 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9172312407 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.05 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446518174944 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153245201854 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106927801419 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312028129667 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705459578006 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... than bachelor than before. In my city, i find poor people always get married ear...
^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ge. They think work is better than have a children. When they have higher salaries, and th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 630, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ow, my mother and me always do not want a children in the later age. In my view, children ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...nd World War II, these experiences make most of people poverty and most of poor people choose ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...o farm work. We are living a peace age, most of people have higher degrees and people live lon...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70431893688 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34486546681 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461794019934 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9172312407 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.05 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446518174944 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153245201854 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106927801419 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312028129667 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705459578006 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.