Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason
for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the
world.
What are your opinions on this?
Current children could play extremely the violent games .Because that the most issue of increase the number of violence and crime , it could be dramatically the violent games. This essay will illustrate this issue in term of environment of children and healthy before presenting my opinion.
On the one hand of this issue , violent games may have a negative side affect on the children in their eduction .This means ,the children try to practice the violence with each other and increase the crime in the schools because they imitation the games between them. In addition , if the parents do not refused their children , they will probably create unsafe environment for study .For example , psychological have a new study about the children they find most of the issues relate to the children who kills other and have due to violent games.As a result of this issue , violent games could threaten the child's environment .
On the other hand , playing violent games can effect children healthy . To clear this, the children could do not physical activity and that would affect their body and can make confusion in their brain and could miss the time of children because the violent games can take attention and force the children to play overmuch .For instance , when Saudi Arabia would except to buy the violent games to the children , the number of violence in the school increase sharply . Therefore , it is necessary to banned the violent games on order to save their healthy .
To summarize , it might not be possible to cover all the aspects of this issue . However, this essay focus only on environment of children and healthy .The most important points that have been mentioned are; using violent games will create imbalance place and can effect badly health of the children. Finally , it can be said that , the parents and teachers should guidance their children to avoid the violent games.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-12-12 | Adam Diedo | 78 | view |
| 2020-02-10 | Atheer2399 | 73 | view |
| 2017-07-04 | dilink | 79 | view |
| 2014-06-16 | luckysun | 60 | view |
- Children today play very violent games This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world What are your opinions on this 73
- The table below shows the amount of waste production in millions of tonnes in six different countries in three different years over a twenty year period 65
- Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n could play extremely the violent games .Because that the most issue of increase ...
^^
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...could play extremely the violent games .Because that the most issue of increase the num...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ncrease the number of violence and crime , it could be dramatically the violent ga...
^^
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...issue in term of environment of children and healthy before presenting my opinion...
^^
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pinion. On the one hand of this issue , violent games may have a negative side ...
^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[12]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)?
Suggestion: side effect
...sue , violent games may have a negative side affect on the children in their eduction .This...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...affect on the children in their eduction .This means ,the children try to practice...
^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...fect on the children in their eduction .This means ,the children try to practice the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e children in their eduction .This means ,the children try to practice the violenc...
^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion the games between them. In addition , if the parents do not refused their ch...
^^
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tween them. In addition , if the parents do not refused their children , they wil...
^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e parents do not refused their children , they will probably create unsafe enviro...
^^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ably create unsafe environment for study .For example , psychological have a new s...
^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ly create unsafe environment for study .For example , psychological have a new stud...
^^^
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nsafe environment for study .For example , psychological have a new study about th...
^^
Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...lls other and have due to violent games.As a result of this issue , violent games ...
^^
Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... violent games.As a result of this issue , violent games could threaten the childs...
^^
Line 3, column 628, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es could threaten the childs environment . On the other hand , playing violent ...
^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hilds environment . On the other hand , playing violent games can effect childr...
^^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iolent games can effect children healthy . To clear this, the children could do no...
^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the violent games can take attention and force the children to play overmuch .For...
^^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and force the children to play overmuch .For instance , when Saudi Arabia would e...
^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...d force the children to play overmuch .For instance , when Saudi Arabia would exce...
^^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... children to play overmuch .For instance , when Saudi Arabia would except to buy t...
^^
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to buy the violent games to the children , the number of violence in the school in...
^^
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... violence in the school increase sharply . Therefore , it is necessary to banned t...
^^
Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the school increase sharply . Therefore , it is necessary to banned the violent g...
^^
Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ent games on order to save their healthy . To summarize , it might not be possi...
^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to save their healthy . To summarize , it might not be possible to cover all t...
^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e to cover all the aspects of this issue . However, this essay focus only on envir...
^^
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y on environment of children and healthy .The most important points that have been...
^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...on environment of children and healthy .The most important points that have been me...
^^^
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ct badly health of the children. Finally , it can be said that , the parents and t...
^^
Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... children. Finally , it can be said that , the parents and teachers should guidanc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99682539683 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42183581445 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.687887548 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.4 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356936837819 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170387007306 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621040353721 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260676802123 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497377390675 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.