Nowadays,adventurous sports is gaining popularity among the youngster's. A few sighted people claim that no sports should be restricted since it can affect the freedom of each individuals, whilst other advocate that dangerous sports should be abolished. In my perception I second the latter group of people since such sports are not life threatening but also fatal at times.
To embark upon,individual who play certain sports is based on the interest and passion to become a sports professionals. To elaborate, people can achieve their dreams when no limits is paved on them. Apart from that there is no age limit for a person to be into a sports activities, since it enables the flocks to explore the world as well as become a source of sustenance. For instance,sports like horse riding and rugby provide numerous job opportunities to the local communities which becomes a sources of economy to the nation as well
On the other hand, audacious sports must be forbidden by the government since it is life perils. To exemplify, albeit activities like bungee jumping help an individual to gain confidence from fear, however it can end up losing the life of the participant. A mishap can incapacitate not only the life of the person but also the happiness and dream of his family. I too agree with this view for the reason that it can also the save the income of the country. To illustrate, sports like paragliding and scuba driving requires plethora of safety equipments and also chances of missing a person is also high which can result in searching operation that might be an expensive part from the government. Hence it is advisable to ban such daredevil sports.
To sum up, albeit,adventerpus sports are thrilling and gains the courage to face the hurdle, it can be hazardous to life of the sports person. Thus it should be strictly prohobited by the local authorities so as to protect the life of the youngsters who are the foundation of tomorrows strong nation.
- Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads Do you agree or disagree with the views What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety 47
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports While others think that people should have freedom to do any sports or activity do you agree or disagree 67
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , adventurous
Nowadays,adventurous sports is gaining popularity among the ...
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Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , individual
...but also fatal at times. To embark upon,individual who play certain sports is based on the...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...ome a source of sustenance. For instance,sports like horse riding and rugby provide num...
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Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a source' or simply 'sources'?
Suggestion: a source; sources
... to the local communities which becomes a sources of economy to the nation as well On...
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Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sources of economy to the nation as well On the other hand, audacious sports must...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...individual to gain confidence from fear, however it can end up losing the life of...
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Line 4, column 698, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... an expensive part from the government. Hence it is advisable to ban such daredevil s...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , adventerpus
...h daredevil sports. To sum up, albeit,adventerpus sports are thrilling and gains the cour...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...dle, it can be hazardous to life of the sports person. Thus it should be strictly proh...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...hazardous to life of the sports person. Thus it should be strictly prohobited by the...
^^^^
Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tly prohobited by the local authorities so as to protect the life of the youngsters who ...
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Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ters who are the foundation of tomorrows strong nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, well, apart from, as to, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90419161677 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.011315269 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4492151645 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203139648171 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712732195649 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637833217142 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134620716835 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756308860065 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , adventurous
Nowadays,adventurous sports is gaining popularity among the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , individual
...but also fatal at times. To embark upon,individual who play certain sports is based on the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...ome a source of sustenance. For instance,sports like horse riding and rugby provide num...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a source' or simply 'sources'?
Suggestion: a source; sources
... to the local communities which becomes a sources of economy to the nation as well On...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sources of economy to the nation as well On the other hand, audacious sports must...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...individual to gain confidence from fear, however it can end up losing the life of...
^^
Line 4, column 698, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... an expensive part from the government. Hence it is advisable to ban such daredevil s...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , adventerpus
...h daredevil sports. To sum up, albeit,adventerpus sports are thrilling and gains the cour...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...dle, it can be hazardous to life of the sports person. Thus it should be strictly proh...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...hazardous to life of the sports person. Thus it should be strictly prohobited by the...
^^^^
Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tly prohobited by the local authorities so as to protect the life of the youngsters who ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ters who are the foundation of tomorrows strong nation.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, well, apart from, as to, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90419161677 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.011315269 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4492151645 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203139648171 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712732195649 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637833217142 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134620716835 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756308860065 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.