Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on the par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree?
According to some, manual workers should be salarised equally to the people with professional degrees. In my opinion, the professional degree holders should be paid higher than a manual worker.
Manual workers lack the professional degree or education required for certain technical jobs. They are incapable to do the management or health care jobs which requires a specific professional degree. The salary of a job cannot be decided only on the basis of work experience or physical skillsof an individual. The work experience can be an additional advantages other than the education but not the sole decider for the job. Certain jobs such as managment requires educational skills such as leadership, maintainence of records rather than a physical experience. For instancethe physical worker cannot a do a job of chief executive officer of a company.
Lastly, manual workers only require educational skills of a school graduation or a college diploma at most. On the comtrary, a professional job requires a bachelor's or a master's degree equivalent to apply. Therefore, the salaries in a professional jobs are higher than a physical worker. Also, if physical workers are paid equal to a professionals, then everyone would prefer a job which requires less educational skills. This will lead to increased illiteracy in a country. Again, the educational value will dramatically fall.
In conclusion, the professionals are rightful to be paid decent salaries than any physical workers.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... For instancethe physical worker cannot a do a job of chief executive officer of a c...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; bachelors
...e comtrary, a professional job requires a bachelors or a masters degree equivalent to apply...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...rofessional job requires a bachelors or a masters degree equivalent to apply. Therefore, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a professional' or simply 'professionals'?
Suggestion: a professional; professionals
..., if physical workers are paid equal to a professionals, then everyone would prefer a job which...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39484978541 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14221716428 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532188841202 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0647398039 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152582620158 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592082667726 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052756790417 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111379478482 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569647169005 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... For instancethe physical worker cannot a do a job of chief executive officer of a c...
^^^^
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; bachelors
...e comtrary, a professional job requires a bachelors or a masters degree equivalent to apply...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...rofessional job requires a bachelors or a masters degree equivalent to apply. Therefore, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a professional' or simply 'professionals'?
Suggestion: a professional; professionals
..., if physical workers are paid equal to a professionals, then everyone would prefer a job which...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39484978541 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14221716428 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532188841202 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0647398039 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152582620158 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592082667726 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052756790417 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111379478482 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569647169005 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.