If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Humans spend a large part of lives in a job. Respective researchers explained that "coworkers influence on each other, and then they could create a relationship affecting their lives" (New York Times). York times). In my perspective, people should give more time for finding a decent career that makes them happier. There are reasons, and I enjoy exploring a good part of them.
As a priority, when you wait to seek an excellent job, you reach a job being more favourable and attractive, so love it. Because you love it, you promote it. For example, after my friend Andy graduated from university, he looked for work. After a while, he had an offering. I did not accept it in that he does not like it. In the upcoming event, he figured out a career that he loved it, and just after a while; he innovated a new method in his company. Also, good work makes a suitable salary for people. Thus, he compensates time that he searches for a job. At the end of the day, it can gain good money that is important for humans. Hence, by waiting for a great job, you find a proper profession.
Moreover, by putting more time in finding an interesting job, individuals are capable of flourish in their lives. They could attain a lot of experience and knowledge. Therefore, in forthcoming incidents, people use these sciences to solve their problems or thrive in their work. Besides, people in a great job get familiar with new friends and colleagues. They not only help people but also stimulate them for thriving. For instance, since having a high-level career such as work at the university, people become familiar with new researchers. In the future, if they hit with an arduous difficulty, they could help them. It, also, participates in their project too and gets fresh experience.
On the other hand, waiting for a remarkable job means you should spend more time and money. These days' life is competitive, and people compete for new resources. If you have problems with subsisting, secure work could be a considerable option. However, I believe, we could handle a situation to find a job.
As a result, people are better to stay for finding work because it is a remarkable part of life and causes people to prosper. Similarly, when people attempt in a job that they love it, and it is interesting, they flourish. I suggested that during waiting for an excellent job, people increase and develop their knowledge by learning computer science because it is a necessary skill, which you need in all jobs.
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- TPO-5 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. 60
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. 70
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 70
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 56
- All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is Use reasons and examples to support your answer 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...should spend more time and money. These days life is competitive, and people compete...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75632183908 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74767368185 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512643678161 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3652620652 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3448275862 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75862068966 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292532963251 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798635495431 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062624772897 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182408864376 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508431691197 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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