Governments should offer free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
"Education is the greatest weapon that can be used to change the world." In my opinion, the above quote rightly answers the statement given above, and I agree with the account given above. There are broadly two reasons that I feel this way.
Firstly, take, for instance, India's population into consideration. Poverty in the country is an issue that cannot be ignored. A large chunk of the population still lives in poverty. In a country where a majority of the population falls in the low-income bracket, everyone can't have equal opportunities when it comes to education. In this scenario, if the government takes the initiative to fund the education of these affected people, there would be equality in society, and this would subsequently alleviate the issue of poverty itself.
Secondly, consider the population of India once again. For many years now, the issue of casteism has not been completely eradicated. Even to this day, a certain level of casteism prevails in society. Lower castes are still looked down upon in few communities, and they fail to get equal opportunities. To tackle this issue, the government of India has the reservation system in place, which reserves a certain number of seats in a university for these marginalized groups and provides them education for a lower cost or for free. This measure has undoubtedly helped in slowly removing the issue of casteism prevalent in society by giving equal opportunities. Additionally, some bright minds have been recognized from these groups that otherwise would have gone unnoticed.
To sum up, some would argue that if education is given for free, it will end up in the government incurring huge costs that would be detrimental to the country's growth. However, people are the best investment, and it is these people that the government helps that can help the government back in the future and help the society itself at large. Education plays a vital role in the development and progress of a country, and the government must ensure that everyone is entitled to the right to education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lls in the low-income bracket, everyone cant have equal opportunities when it comes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i feel, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8717752563 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546783625731 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3882720366 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106124941753 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278228836359 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320318759677 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588602275201 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312410572758 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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