The advent of technology has revolutionized in the life of human being. Among the all available technologies, the role of the internet is incredibly impressive because it make the works easier and faster. Regarding to this issue, it is the long-lasting debate among the authorities whether government should spend money on improving transportation or internet access. From my perspective, internet access is more necessary. In subsequent paragraph, I will elaborate on my point of view cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that these days I can say without a shadow of a doubt no works can be done without any internet access. In other words, all of the works are extremely depend on internet such as banks, universities, companies, transportation systems, and so on. For example, in last month I applied to university and I sent all of my documents by internet and it was easiest and cheapest way to me. Otherwise I should go by airplane to other country to give my documents and it causes to waste more time and cost.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating in this issue is that in technological world some people prefer to work from home and it is not necessary to present in work place. They send their tasks and results by internet to manager or other responsible person. For example my wife is a PHD student in the university and some time she works from home and has contact by internet with her professors. Consequently, by this attitude in the world people can save time for other activities.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that communication has changed by the internet in comparison to the past. Nowadays, there are various social media applications in smart phones and families or friends in different cities can see and speak with together every time when they wants. Internet access make it easiest for people and internet has crucial role in our life now.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it efficiently increase the productivity and relationship of the individuals. Although it certainly has some negative effects, the vast majority of the experts and socialists firmly believe its advantages are undoubtedly outweighs its drawbacks. All in all, it is anticipated that by investing in this issue, it will bring the huge economy development.
- Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic team 60
- TPO 54 Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...net is incredibly impressive because it make the works easier and faster. Regarding ...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ut any internet access. In other words, all of the works are extremely depend on internet ...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...r words, all of the works are extremely depend on internet such as banks, universities...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... it was easiest and cheapest way to me. Otherwise I should go by airplane to other countr...
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Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...ntry to give my documents and it causes to waste more time and cost. Another equally...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it causes to waste more time and cost. Another equally noteworthy point corrobo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple can save time for other activities. Finally, it is an indisputable fact that...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...peak with together every time when they wants. Internet access make it easiest for pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernet has crucial role in our life now. In brief, all the aforementioned reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, regarding, so, for example, in brief, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03875968992 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04782525106 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537467700258 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6640056115 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.631578947 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171799414924 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514052155389 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652373027626 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919772550561 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663304199763 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.