do you agree or disagree Young people are less engaged in community services nowadays

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do you agree or disagree?\

Young people are less engaged in community services nowadays.

Helping the community to improve is everyone's responsibility. Although some people believe that young people do give time to help their communities, I think that they are not engaging enough in the community work and community-based activities. My argumentations are as follows.

To begin with, most of the young people grow with the ideology" enjoy life as long as you are young". This ideology makes them too busy with the life joys. Some play video games and some start other activities like sports etc. For example, once our teacher asked one my friends that what is your purpose in the future and he answered that he wanted to be a gamer. That is why I agree with the statement.

Secondly, Teenagers and young people do not have motivators. This means that there is no body to tell them that they should work for their community. All families nowadays became self-oriented and just want their children to be a successful and rich person. They teach their children the way of making money not the way of serving the country and the community. This is the problem and this is the reason why youngsters do not have time for their community.

Third, in some places, when children grow up, they start to think of making family and career. This makes them so busy and takes a lot of their time. Making money, working for success in life and career, finding a good husband or wife all are hard works and time-consuming processes that prevent young people from thinking about their community and their responsibilities towards it.

In conclusion, teenagers and youngsters do not participate to help their communities nowadays. For the reasons mentioned before, this is a fact in my opinion. People should change their perspectives about life. If we change ourselves, our younger generations will also change. we should shift from this self-oriented perspective to community-oriented perspective in order to have a good and desirable community.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...ve motivators. This means that there is no body to tell them that they should work for ...
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Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...r younger generations will also change. we should shift from this self-oriented pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04615384615 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94616951191 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5065337433 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0952380952 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18882457112 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560783346312 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750938061387 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114611358783 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681273329883 0.0645574589148 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...ve motivators. This means that there is no body to tell them that they should work for ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...r younger generations will also change. we should shift from this self-oriented pe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04615384615 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94616951191 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5065337433 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0952380952 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18882457112 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560783346312 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750938061387 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114611358783 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681273329883 0.0645574589148 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.