The chart below gives information about billions of euros invested in four areas by various organisations.
The bar graph illustrates the investment on 4 business sectors in five different organizations in Billions of euros.
In general Organization A, B and C shows the highest investment while organization D and E shows the lowest.
On the contrary, Organization B shows the highest investment which is more than 1.8 Billion on Staff training and 1.6 Billion on Research while Organization A saves about 1.5 billion on Building which is higher than the Organisation B. in addition Organisation A investing 1.2 Billion on staff training that makes it the second highest, comparing to other organizations. Organisation C saves 1.3 billion euros on machinery and reaserch, although it invest less on Building and staff training. Organisation C, D and E invested similar amount on Building which is 1 Billion euros and organization B and D invested less than that amount on machinery and also similar to each other. In the contrast Organisation D and E are the least invested on all 4 sectors.
- Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals others think that is affected by other factors Discuss both views and state your opinion by using examples from your personal experience 82
- The chart below gives information about billions of euros invested in four areas by various organisations 80
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health Others believe that governments should make sure that their citizens are healthy Discuss both views 63
- The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports center now and how tit will look after redevelopment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A safe', 'A save' or simply 'saves'?
Suggestion: A safe; A save; Saves
... Billion on Research while Organization A saves about 1.5 billion on Building which is ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ganisation B. in addition Organisation A investing 1.2 Billion on staff training ...
^^
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'invests'?
Suggestion: invests
... on machinery and reaserch, although it invest less on Building and staff training. Or...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 759, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re the least invested on all 4 sectors.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, in general, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24353687299 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490797546012 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2859213246 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252902433732 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139367204711 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508470210474 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13587456394 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967014375522 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.