As all we know, nowadays having a satisfactory and also secured job is very important for individuals and people always are looking to find an appropriate job for themselves.
Personally, I believe that having a satisfactory job is better than a secured job. I feel this way because of some reasons which I will explorer in the following essay:
First of all, as all we know our world and the society that we live in are developing with high pace and consequently with the improvement of the technology, every day companies are releasing new devices, applications and other things to the market in order to make the life easier and also for obtain more benefits and in result there is a severe competition between them. Accordingly, as companies are developing every day hence they need more people to work for them, so in my opinion if a person is looking for a job, if he or she search more carefully and be patient enough, finally he / she could find a satisfactory job, because as I explained earlier there is a high demand for working force.
In addition, I am of the opinion that, being satisfied in our life is very important issue especially about our career life. We spend at least 7 hours a day in our workplace and our mood in there has direct effect to our personal life. If we spend these 7 hours happily we could be more beneficial for our company and also for our family and friends. When we complement our tasks more eagerly, our output would increase a lot. Against that if we complain about our job every day and we continue that just because it’s a secure job, we would become to an emotionally sick person. My personal experiment is a compelling evidence of this: last year I decided to quit my job and start another one, after some days I had a job offer from a well-known company but actually I did not like that job but just because the company was very famous I accepted that. After a while I realized that I am not the happy and active person like before and it was because I did not like my job and I was not satisfied person while I was working them, and finally I figure out that having just a secured job does not worth and its drawbacks are considerable.
Beside all of these, I think that if people do their tasks and duties perfectly, their job security would be guaranteed.
In conclusion, according to foreheads reasons, having this opportunity to get a satisfactory job would have more beneficial for us and it worth to wait for it. Nowadays companies are seeking for new and active workforce and everyone has this chance to find an appropriated job which could result in his or happiness and productivity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 536, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'searches'.
Suggestion: searches
...rson is looking for a job, if he or she search more carefully and be patient enough, f...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in his or happiness and productivity.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, look, so, well, while, at least, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56813417191 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67925971594 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46750524109 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.575777989 48.9658058833 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.642857143 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0714285714 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.45110844103 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329166930915 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138303805498 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965981965877 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201417513014 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397684897767 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 536, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'searches'.
Suggestion: searches
...rson is looking for a job, if he or she search more carefully and be patient enough, f...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in his or happiness and productivity.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, look, so, well, while, at least, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56813417191 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67925971594 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46750524109 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.575777989 48.9658058833 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.642857143 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0714285714 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.45110844103 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329166930915 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138303805498 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965981965877 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201417513014 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397684897767 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.