Write a proposal to raise students' awareness about corona virus outbreak.
proposal TO RAISE felte students’ AWARENESS OF coronavirus outbreak
Introduction
I am submitting a formal proposal concerning student’s awareness about the coronavirus outbreak with a view to maintaining their health as well as preventing transmission.
Current situation
The serious outbreak of coronavirus (Covid-19) which transmits from infected patients to others through close contact has petrified the whole world with its highly contagious nature. it, nothwithstanding, seems apparent that not many students in felte are aware of protective measures against this fatal disease.
plans of action
This section shows our plan for developing a sense of responsibility among felte students in fighting this severe epidemic.
First and foremost, seeing that there is no specific treatment available as of now, we are going to launch a campaign which is aiming to strengthen student’s self-awareness of Covid-19. To maximize the effectiveness of our strategy, we intend to distribute posters, leaflets and flyers in our campus in order to broaden theirknowledge and understanding. At the same time, frequent disinfection is expected to be carried out to alleviate the infectious possibility of virus to some extent.
In the second place, it is noteworthy that we hold a virtual conference in which medical experts or local authorities are invited and then render their assistance on how to protect ourselves from the virus to the whole students in the faculty. Those might include counsel such as washing hands frequently with an alcohol-based hand rub or maintaining social distancing to prevent person-to-person transmission.
Expenditure
With regard to espousal, I call for a genreous sponsorship which is estimated $300 from coroperate organizations so that our ambitious plan will admirably succeed.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I anticipate that the outlined scheme above would receive your serious consideration because of its undoubtedly benefits.
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| 2021-11-18 | Vu Mai Phuong | 50 | view |
| 2020-02-26 | winggienguyen | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Proposal
proposal TO RAISE felte students’ AWARENESS OF c...
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...orld with its highly contagious nature. it, nothwithstanding, seems apparent that ...
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Suggestion: Plans
...e measures against this fatal disease. plans of action This section shows our plan ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, with regard to, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79725085911 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36292178372 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5570713077 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.363636364 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222884718311 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069879315952 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108502617865 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122069359678 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149547357788 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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