Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?»
In the contemporary society a plethora of people conceive capital punishment as unnecessary, intolerant and inhuman method of fighting crime. Whereas a cohort of people might believe that it is a powerful way to suspend the continued increase in crime in many countries. Despite considering this type of punishment as a cruel method of struggle, I tend to think that a death penalty still needs to apply as a sentence for murders. Therefore, I partly agree with this statement.
First of all, it is generally felt that every guilty person has the right to correct an error, because the crime can be committed accidentally or unintentionally. This is especially true for minor crimes such as burglary, fraud or pick pocketing. They are not directly related to the deterioration of human life. The prohibition of capital punishment and the right to freely dispose of life are confirmed by many laws and constitutions of countries. No sooner was a death penalty used, it would become impossible to reeducate a prisoner. Moreover, people’s life is invaluable. Humanity can teach criminals to do good and useful deeds that change the world`s attitude to them.
From the opposite point of view, another factor which is essential is an opportunity of the government not to spend much money on maintaining a vital activity of the criminals when they have been in prison for more than 10 years, for instance. Primarily, this procedure is required to apply to the murders who take the lives of others. According to this argument, government expenses for the prisoners and the guard. A death penalty can be an effective measure to prevent crime. Thereby, it enables to warn about the danger to society and not to repeat mistakes in the future. For example, China's experience in shooting for serious crimes and the statistics show the opportunity to live in the non - criminal, safe and peaceful world.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that capital punishment could be the efficient measure used to punish serious crimes and diminish expenditure on prison maintenance, but at the same time people should not forget about the humanity of society and the importance of preserving the life of every person on earth because this contributes to changing the character and lifestyle of criminals in the nearest future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12010443864 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94617582396 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558746736292 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8001814312 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.944444444 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199481852494 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573146284446 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553860912968 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129969457426 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648923197127 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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