Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific examples and reasons to support your opinions.
Communities plays a very important role in our life. The place where we live beside peoples are our neighbor and the collection of neighbor is form the community. Nowadays people are not giving enough time to help their community, some would agree, others would disagree with this statement. In my view, we are not giving enough time to help our next-doers because of the following two important reason.
The main reason is that, we are living now a single family rather than living joint family that ultimately made us parochial. The family we are now prefer to live only consist of two or three members, but before our family consist mostly our parents, their parents, uncles and also their family member. For example, I was raised in a joint family in a remote village of Bangladesh and my family consist of father, mother, sister, aunt, grandparents, and brother. Our family and other family in the village were living in a harmony. Each and every ceremony we were used to inviting other families in our house and we were passing good time with them. And also during afflictions or disease we were used to helping and supporting other families. This type of living is always more meaningful than today living style. Today we have not enough time to pay attention other families and we don’t care others. And this type of living is somewhat clumsy and whimsical. As you can see that by living with others, by sharing merriment and enjoyment with others is more meaningful than living in a secluded ways where no one cares other.
Another reason is that as technological flood has been swept our lives, now people only busy with themselves. The advancement of internet, several social medias has taught us to lead a life where paying attention in Facebook feeds, sharing our moments and communicate via Messenger and E-mail is more prevalent than traditional communication where, communication has done via stamping letter, going our relative house and invite them in special occasion has largely been omitted from our lives. For instance, when I was living in a joint family, we used to send letter to our relatives, waiting for a long time to get their phone call. These activities was more joys and helped to strengthen our relation. One day, a clash occurred in our village with another village and a poor man has been severely injured, immediately we took him to the hospital. If these incident occurred today, no one is coming to help to the injured man. This experience has taught me that the so called change has been drawn by technological innovation is a mere illusion, in reality the ties with our neighborhood has not increased yet rather disrupted and it also belie our actual relation.
In sum, some would disagree however the real scenarios is more complex, where our relation with our neighbors is lessen. This is not only hurt our families but also severed our ties with our next-doers, as we have not enough moment to notice them. Hence, we should pay attention to our neighbors to hold a good relation and also to protect the humane hood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...ade us parochial. The family we are now prefer to live only consist of two or three me...
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Line 3, column 1097, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...re meaningful than living in a secluded ways where no one cares other. Another re...
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Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
... get their phone call. These activities was more joys and helped to strengthen our ...
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Line 5, column 1143, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belies'?
Suggestion: belies
...reased yet rather disrupted and it also belie our actual relation. In sum, some wo...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...here our relation with our neighbors is lessen. This is not only hurt our families but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2546.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83111954459 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53733752724 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480075901328 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9245777601 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9583333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138709495204 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524119548507 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663076580988 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112462640667 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892163978023 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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