these days many countries are facing different problems,so it is better that each country concentrates on solving its own problems, instead of co-operating with other countries.Do you agree or disagree?
In this twenty first century, countries around the world are facing several issues. Therefore some people beleives that these problems should be resolved comfortably with the support of other nations. Hence, in this essay I would strongly agree to this statement.
To commence, developing countries are mostly confronted with the challenges related to poverty ,diseases crime and terrorism. This can be directly affect the socio-economic development of the country.In certaincircumstances,these nations are incapable to tackleproblems alone by an effective method. For instance,when country suffesrs from communicable diseases which can be spread to neighbouring countries, So in this situation government shoul seek assistance from another kingdoms inorder to save themselves and others. Moreover,terrorismand crime will adversely affect the equilibrium of world peace.Therefore several united nations organisations plays a critical role in helping weaker countries to eradicateterrorism and to achieve sustaianable growth in the world.
Furthermore, unemployment among young people has been became a burning concern of majority of underdeveloped countries.This dilemaa could be deal with the cooperatopn of international agenacies.A powerful international organisation can provide immense employment opportunities to the educated yougsters which eventually increase the capital income of the country. In addition, with the joint effort of rich nations, backward governments could start lanrge scale ventureswhich also reduce unemployment to an extent.
However, there are many consequences may occur by accepting aids from foreign countrie. The major one is that the poor countrieswould become over dependent on rich nations. Secondly,by introducing international companies there would be a chance to exploit people in impoverished nations by granding low wages.
To put in a nutshell, I pendown saying that , the best way to resolve problems is to co-operate with other countries instead of solving themselves for an obvious result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13240418118 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68042452597 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662020905923 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2769614058 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.384615385 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197896066457 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666353412935 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768224792898 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118282396006 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991780803865 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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