many elderly people are no longer looked after their families but are putting care home and nursing homes does this development has more advantages than its possible disadvantage
The knowledge and experience of elder one is precious and it is very costly as gold. In the modern era there are so many elderly home, which has certain advantages and disadvantages. In my view aged people need to be cared in their own home environment.
One of the major point of retirement home is that it reduce that time spend for the elders owing to be the fact that there is no time for the family members to take care elders because of their work schedule and busy life. Another benefit for the severely elder one who get adequate healthcare, safety and security in the nursing homes rather than from the home environment.
In spite of this advantages, which has some drawbacks also. elder people in the old age homes have no any freedom they are restricted to a four corner building and they are not emotionally stable. In home they are happy with their children and grandchildren. Another detrimental effect is that they have some likes and dislikes in their food habits and rituals but it should not considered in care centres and also the force to follow the institutions policies. These all are dissatisfaction to them. In addition to that if they have the ability to think and adequate memory is left there, the thought they are burden to their children and the loneliness of them in the old age home make them a depressed one.
in summary the old age homes are essential in the modern life because of the busy life of the youth, Paris there is a right to the elder one to be kept by their family members. Their sweat made this youth as like this, so in my personal opinion the elder one should be cared by their families and don't forget the fact that one day you will become an older one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition, in summary, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47266881029 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42101902363 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0066803044 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288092694136 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107173630153 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600403427627 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189688620113 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411699028895 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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