You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for the residents.
Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe the problem
say what you think the council should do about the situation
Dear Mr. Graham,
I am Mary Smith, president of Townsville area. I have been a resident in the area for the last 5 years and am writing to express my concern about the recent changes in the regulations, approved by you.
Due to an increasing number of robberies occurring in the area, the Council has issued that the main entrance of the area will be closed at sharp 10 PM. This can become problematic, as there are many people in the area who work far from home and by the time they reach home it becomes well past 10 PM. Also, for families that have patients in the hospital or those that needs medical help may suffer due to this change.
I believe the council can tighten the security of area by appointing more guards and installing advance security cameras.
I advise you to revise the regulations and make amendments, so that the residents can go back to living peacefully. I look forward to hearing from you on the measures taken.
Your sincerely,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Graham, I am Mary Smith, president of Townsville...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...nt in the area for the last 5 years and am writing to express my concern about the...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dents can go back to living peacefully. I look forward to hearing from you on the...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the measures taken. Your sincerely, Mary Smith
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62285714286 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50456562693 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674285714286 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9653894589 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222670595747 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801993313023 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585858207502 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125049250472 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485201895547 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.