With the technological advancements, a new phenomenon called globalization has risen. It has given the world a new economic and integrated outlook, bringing the world together.While it has fundamentally beneficial influence our lives,it has also given way for some negative impacts which are not scrutinized properly.
Globalization improves not only developed nations but also developing nations, providing varied advantages. For the former, it provides better job opportunities, better technologies and development in infrastructure ,and for the latter, it ensures provision of raw materials and...
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While it has fundamentally beneficial influence our lives,
While it has fundamentally beneficial influence on our lives,
Sentence: Without adequate infrastructure and capital, enterpreneurs from third world countries fail to compete with multinational giants.
Error: enterpreneurs Suggestion: entrepreneurs
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