Recent year, some countries have changed to use alternative energy instead of traditional energy. What do you think about this?
In recent years, many countries has changed to use alternative energy ( eg. solar, wind ) instead of fossil fuels ( eg. coals, oil and gas ). Alternative energy offers a solution for rising demand of countries of energy, but it also brings a lot of challenges.
It’s understandable why people find that alternative sources of energy isn’t enougn to power our modern life. This is because renewable energy depends on the condition of weather which influences on constant energy supply. For example, solar panels need sunshine to get the head to change into electricity. Besides, these green energy require a high upfront cost. Different from traditional energy which can be used directly, alternative energy needs devices originating from inventories of developed countries to run.
However, in my opinion, using renewable sources of energy brings us many advantages especially in extremely polluted environment nowadays. In the long run, alternative energy helps countries around the world reduce the total expense on economy because the green energy is unlimited and available in nature. More importantly, renewable energy is frendly to our Earth. Take wind power as an example, it release zero carbon into environment so the ozon layer is kept from thining. This kind of energy doesn’t produce toxic emissions like carbon which protects the environment.
In conclusion, countries all over the world should use alternative energy rather than traditional energy. Although it may be not efficient in some case and needs high cost to set up, alternative energy still plays an important role in protecting the earth and keeping sustanability development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49609375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86416213405 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5466311156 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378686119582 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125615459706 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924139336928 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244185951506 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366783351149 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.