Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Friends play an important role in a person’s life. They always accompany with us, whenever and wherever you are in. Some people think it is important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. However, from my perspective, I disagree with the statement.
Admittedly, keeping old friends is of importance sometimes, especially when you are in a extreme dilemma. To be more concrete, old friends have a good grasp of our characteristics and styles of living because you have known each other for a long time. They know what you most need. And there is a profound and deep friendship between you. So they probably tend to be more willing to help you when you involve some harsh situations such as shortage of money. When you want to borrow money from others. The first people you can recall is definitely your old friend. However, if you express your need to your new friends, they may not help you since they do not know whether you are reliable. So, keeping old friends is important sometimes.
However, making new friends is more significant than keeping old friends sometimes. To be more specific, new friends are who you have not known before. What are their characteristics, what they like, what they are good at. You contact each other the first time. So it is interesting to get along with new friends because there will be a new experience between you, which is keeping old friends does not have. For example, when I entered into college, I did not know others in my dormitory room. But I found it was amazing to know them, we interacted each other, share some things new for both. Such as dialect. There is a roommate of mine who come from Sichuan Province, he told me a lot about his dialect I never heard before, which is different from my language. You can imagine how I was exciting then.
Furthermore, making new friends is more of crucial than keeping old friends sometimes because they can help you to fit right in to new environment. You are both in new environment, many issues require cooperation and deliberation among you. Some ideas you cannot imagine will be came up with by your new friends. They can also utilize some skills that can help you deal with some problems such as bulb-repairing in the dormitory. So, making new friends benefit you more and thus is important than keeping old friends sometimes.
In conclusion, keeping old friends help is crucial when you are in a extreme dilemma, but making new friends is more significant when you are in a new environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71201814059 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6338646941 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455782312925 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8191213575 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6551724138 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2068965517 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44827586207 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528739517549 0.236089414692 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169942273117 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151654597978 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376317831538 0.150856017488 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534969329369 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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