Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, tourism has become a lucrative industry. The issue of tourists’ reaction to the host country's traditions and behaviour has become controversial. There are numerous conflicting ideas between those who claim that tourists should respect and follow local customs and others who assert that countries should refer to cultural differences of people who visit their countries. In what follows, both of these viewpoints will first discussed and then my own position would be delineated.
To begin with, the primary reason for those who believe that tourists should act like the other people ...
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if the host country does not welcome cultural splits,
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in the near future.
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