Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirit.
I'm writing this letter to give you an excited news about a concert for which I had won 2 passes. Actually, Elante mall is organizing a live event in which Beyonce is performing with one of the top band Michael Chores. Program is for about 6 hours from 6 PM on 26 February, Sunday.
The story behind winning the ticket is really interesting, as I went to mall for purchasing shoes for my younger brother as a present for his 17 birthday. Any one who orders for Rs 5000 will automatically get enrolled for a draw and I'm the one among 5 lucky customers.
As I skipped your sister wedding ceremony due to unavoidable circumstances, hence, I believe that we can enjoy sometime together. Moreover, I knew you are a huge fan of Beyonce, so you cannot miss this opportunity.
Super excited to see you.
Your faithfully,
Roman Square.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ou in the best of health and spirit. Im writing this letter to give you an exci...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'excited news'.
Suggestion: excited news
.... Im writing this letter to give you an excited news about a concert for which I had won 2 p...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Anyone'?
Suggestion: Anyone
...other as a present for his 17 birthday. Any one who orders for Rs 5000 will automatical...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tomatically get enrolled for a draw and Im the one among 5 lucky customers. As ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62804878049 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71704333959 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719512195122 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7754949686 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215727948647 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870499604014 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752677332957 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120055825524 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527588419279 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.