today tv channels provide man's sport shows more than women's sport shows, why? should tv channels give equal time for women's sport and men's sport
People have differing views with regard to the question why TV programmes favour to supply man's sport shows over women's pastimes shows and whether TV channels should give equivalent time for both sexual categories.
There are variety reasons which cause this controversial topic. Firstly, it seems that in Indochinese countries, man are more crucial than women. This is simply because their customs were affected by feudal system. Hence, people may pay more attention to man's recreation shows rather than that of women. Secondly, female;s pastimes shows have less passionate fans. It means women are not really into genres sports. To illustrate, when females are asked about their interests, seemingly most answers are comestic, cooking or singging.
In order to mitigate this issue, TV channels should make equal time between gentlements and ladies' sport shows. As soon as this worry trend is tackled, there is a social justice which has been rebuilt. Additionally, women will not feeling of inferiority and distinguishing between two genders will alliviate. Apart from the abovementioned practical concerned, authority should give more programmes for both not only sports but also others group of entertainment.
Taking everything into account, man's priority and lack of true fans in women's sport shows have caused this trend. However, TV channels should give equal point in time beteeen two genders' sport shows to mitigate this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, apart from, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43303571429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6220487236 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1508548774 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493202151079 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143365353191 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141423676844 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320667431164 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115601901863 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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