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Which has a larger influence on the society: Automobiles or airplanes?
Thank to the colossal advance of technology in the past decades, fuel-eating transportation vehicles have become indispensable parts of our daily life. When it comes to life, people rely more and more on automobiles like cars, buses and taxis even without their consciousness. When it comes to the most influential transportation vehicle to the whole society, however, I believe airplanes must be put in the place. To substantiate my point of view, I would like to illustrate the huge impact that airplanes has affected our society.
Though one could technically drive a car across countries, like ...
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airplanes has affected our society.
airplanes have affected our society.
Yet airplanes have enable one
Yet airplanes have enabled one
airplanes has definitely a larger influence on society.
airplanes have definitely a larger influence on society.
Sentence: Yet airplanes have enable one to go farer with ease.
Error: farer Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Airplanes can not only bring us to farer places but also save time.
Error: farer Suggestion: No alternate word
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Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 468 350
No. of Characters: 2298 1500
No. of Different Words: 276 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.651 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.91 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.652 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 165 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.616 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.259 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
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