TPO 11 q2, Information in internet is valuable or harmful!

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TPO 11 q2, Information in internet is valuable or harmful!

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any place of the word
any place of the world

the finding the best product would be very easy
finding the best product would be very easy
the finding of the best product would be very easy

Today’s there are a lot of online courses which was proposed through internet.
Today there are a lot of online courses which were proposed through internet.

Sentence: Finally yet importantly, the people can have a healthier body by using the advices which are putted in the internet.
Error: putted Suggestion: put

Sentence: Based on the above-mentioned points, I am convinced that the information putted in the websites can lead to a more convenient and easier life and help us in many aspects.
Error: putted Suggestion: put

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No. of Words: 507 while No. of Different Words: 222

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Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 507 350
No. of Characters: 2446 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.745 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 173 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.28 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.43 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.32 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5