It has been claimed that living in foreign country where people rarely speak your primary language can affect significantly in different life aspects, including social and practical problems. In my perspective, I highly acknowledge this obstacle. According to the statement, this essay could give a further expanation about the issue of living abroad.
Evidently, lack of social interaction is the main problem when meeting abroad. Language barrier results to the pretension of taking daily conversation between people, which may cause trouble in communicating in social life. Beside that, this also leads to some risky communication problems because of misunderstanding crucial informations when working with medical sector or the police. For instance, if you pronounce indistinctly the medicine you could not assume, you would get serious allergic which risks your life and health.
Additionally, mental illness could occur, which results from the difficulty in interacting with the society. Generally, amount of people who living abroad firstly would feel homesick, lonely and stress, especially the one who could not speak local language. Those people who could not overcome those feeling, therefore results in depression and anti-social behaviour. On the other hand, they have to face with more serious criticism and racism than the others, and most of the time they do not defend those opinions because they do not understand local language.
To sum up, living in a foreign country without knowing their language is definitely a tough decision. The necessity of speaking a language abroad is undeniable, which I firmly believe that could be solved with a significant amount of patience and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving abroad firstly would feel homesick, lonely and stress, especially the one wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51526717557 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84688052883 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0848213094 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290176625245 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835973128478 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768163059979 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158227719487 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604394300463 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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