Smoking not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, I completely agree with statement that smoking should be banned in the public places.
Firstly, banned smoking can decrease the risks of fire in places with highly flammable materials. For example, lots of markets fires have been caused because a smoker has thrown a cigarette lit up in the markets, so thousands of merchandise, many buildings have also caught fire, even many people have died due to these ignorances of the smokers.
Secondly, smokers pollute the air. They breathe out hundred times as much pollution as non-smokers. Secondhand smoke is especially dangerous of children, women who are pregnant, the elder,… For instance, mothers who breath secondhand smoke while pregnant are more likely to have babies with low birth weight even died, the children exposed to secondhand smoke are more likely to develop bronchitis, pneumonia, …
Finally, smoking can decrease your productivity on the job, although you are not puffing on cigarettes in the office. Smokers are absent from work more. Factories and business lose millions of dollars every year because of smokers because smokers have higher medical bills.
In conclusion, I think that smoking should be banned in public places. This have positive impacts on both community health and development of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...okers pollute the air. They breathe out hundred times as much pollution as non-smokers....
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...ldren, women who are pregnant, the elder,… For instance, mothers who breath second...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...children exposed to secondhand smoke are more likely to develop bronchitis, pneum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35813953488 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6091903968 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660465116279 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.041314828 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327898910855 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137935223347 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139664013656 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206911141085 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160113332247 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.