some people work for the same organization all their working life. other think that it is better to work different organization. Discuss Both Views and give your own opinion.
In modern times the issue of working in a same organization for a whole life has become highly controversial. There are those who say that working in a same organization for their life time however others believe that it is better to work different organization. In this eassy i will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally Speaking there are wide range of aspect why people think that working in a same organization for their whole life. Perhaps the strongest argument in favour of this viewpoint is in the area of if a people working in a same organization for their life time then a company can be benefitted. For example an employee is worked for a company around 20 years then he learnt lot of things from that company and he can go to a top position as well as he can give valuable advise to this company for it's betterment. This is happen because of his extreme knowledge for working a long time of this company.
Despite these arguments many people believe that if a people is worked in a different company then he can learn or gather lots of information and he can improve himself for this position. A good illustration of this is that if a person work in a multinational company and after two years je switched to a new company. This is how he can develop himself and do better to the next company. In this way that company can get benefits by the experience of that employee.
In conclusion , it must be said that switching job has become a complex issue with no eassy solutions. Having considered both sides of the issue i would argue that working a same organization for life time is beneficial for both the employee and employer. If an organization set a policy like a bond for ten years for serving same company then it will be benefitted both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52905198777 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70613403893 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464831804281 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.375628344 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386295453398 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16445650889 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136521041857 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274165741284 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117945290182 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.