you have just enrolled in a 12 week english class,but have found that you have a family problem and you will have to
return home . write to the school.
Explain what happened
request for a refund
ask whether you will be able to return at a later date.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am JOhn, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to express my inability to continue with your English course which I have recently enrolled. As I hail from a business class family and my grandfather is in-charge of this venture. Sadly, my grandfather was hospitalized due to sudden cardiac arrest, thus the entire responsibility of business operations has shifted on my shoulders now.
At the time of enrollment, I deposited the whole tuition fees but I have not attended any class yet. Thus, It would be highly appreciable if you return my tuition fees after making some suitable deductions. I have attached my bank account details along with original copy of tuition fees receipt. Kindly , credit refund in my account as soon as possible.
I have keen interest in course as I know it would be conductive in ameliorating my linguistic skills and pursuing the post graduation studies. Although It would not be pragmatically possible for me to join this course during this year, I assure you that I would continue this in next year. I would be grateful if you could inform when you would release this amount.
I am anticipating a positive and prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully
Navdeep Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to express m...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., I deposited the whole tuition fees but I have not attended any class yet. Thus,...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nal copy of tuition fees receipt. Kindly , credit refund in my account as soon as ...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me to join this course during this year, I assure you that I would continue this ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99061032864 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80179449752 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8518394272 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189450802626 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660603105774 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527016596988 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096103337072 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070282347852 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.