In the modern world, with the advance of technology, human life expectancy has been increasing at a rapid rate. This essay will discuss the two most important related problems, including increasing the risk of disease, disabilities, and dementia for the elderly and put pressure on countries’ economies. Our essay will also suggest some simple solutions, including increasing retirement age, and getting help from technology.
With thanks to healthier lifestyles, sufficient food, and improve medical care, people live longer so, as countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated, like growing risk of disease and severe impact on countries’ economies. The main issue is that many people will be eligible to receive a pension so, it will directly affect the GDP index. On the other side, increasing life expectancy causes increased morbidity, and the demand for healthcare will increase. For example, 30% of the population over 60 in the UK become demented and need special care. As can be seen, a growing average of age-rate causes many vital problems, even for developed countries.
Several actions can be taken by governments to alleviate these destructive effects. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age, like from 60 to 70. This slight change can have a very strong effect on countries’ GDP index. Secondly, by investing and developing artificial intelligent robots, the healthcare system can be improved substantially. In this case, the elderly patient can get services from AI robots instead of nurses, which saves a lot of money on medical expenses. These solutions show how governments can decrease the influence of the main issue on the economy and healthcare system.
Although rising in average life expectancy causes vital problems, there are some simple solutions to prevent severe effects. This essay discussed two main related issues and also suggested some simple solutions in detail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41639344262 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83594996448 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5729310219 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304509078551 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969788495525 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613190853136 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17919929094 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554884882909 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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