Dear Bahram
I'm writing to you concerning the request you have had recently. I came across a recruitment advertisement two days ago and considering your abilities; I think it would be quite fit for you.
The company is in the field of technology and providing hardware and devices for many firms and corporations. They need an experienced expert in their technical section for installing equipment in the worksite and also providing technical support for customers that have been working with the company.
According to your CV, since you're graduated in IT and have an excellent background in dealing with high-tech products along working in some related firms, I think you could be a suitable candidate for this vacancy. Besides, your comprehensive knowledge of English will be a potential advantage.
The advertisement wants the nominees to apply for this job position by sing up on their website and submit a copy of the required document such as passport, photo, national ID card, and last academic degree.
I hope this information would be useful for you and please let me know if you need any help.
Sincerely,
Mehrdad
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: adfire
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Bahram Im writing to you concerning the request y...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...e company. According to your CV, since youre graduated in IT and have an excellent b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10215053763 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89878692918 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3159820286 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362685046144 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13178773025 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857931339962 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188949621913 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931353183544 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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