Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
It is more important to keep your old fiends than it is to make new friends.
In life people plays many roles. Some people come to help, some to teach lesson, some to make you happy, some to give a moral support and etc. In every individuals life friendship is one of the relationships that reflects your character. As their is an proverb saying that "character of a person can be judged by his/her friendship. As friendship become older and older it will leads to a beautiful bonding.
Old friends are the one who knows you from past many days, so that you can trust them and also you can feel free to talk to then. With a good friend we can share any of the feelings that it may be personal or non personal because they understood you and they know what you are from many days. For example, their was a economic crunch in our family , I used to share these situation with my friends. This will help to an extent as it acts as stress bursting.
Furthermore, with your old friends you doesn't need to justify what you are because they know you very well and nothing negatively impact the relationships. If the friendship become older and older, trust between the persons will increase and make more compatible zone to you. Any feelings you can share with them they won't misunderstand yourself because of the time bondings that have elapsed from long time.
Eventhough new friendship can improve your contact and network, you can't deal as you deal with your old besties. Though at some point of time purpose can be served with our new contacts but we cannot hope so for future days, untill the friendship nurture with trust. You can't share your feelings suddenly with your new community because of the threat of misunderstanding you and even sometimes missing the relationships.
As advantages of old friends outweighs the advantages of making new friends, I personally agree to the fact so that retaining the old contact with friends is much more important than to make new friendships
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...you happy, some to give a moral support and etc. In every individuals life friendship is...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... give a moral support and etc. In every individuals life friendship is one of the relations...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...nships that reflects your character. As their is an proverb saying that 'charact...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...at reflects your character. As their is an proverb saying that 'character of ...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...iendship become older and older it will leads to a beautiful bonding. Old friends...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... from many days. For example, their was a economic crunch in our family , I used ...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...heir was a economic crunch in our family , I used to share these situation with my...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
... crunch in our family , I used to share these situation with my friends. This will help to an e...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Furthermore, with your old friends you doesnt need to justify what you are because th...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n improve your contact and network, you cant deal as you deal with your old besties....
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... the friendship nurture with trust. You cant share your feelings suddenly with your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, even so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74029850746 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62841937966 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8113321959 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301901956171 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990905000064 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102221119509 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198576694497 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112159056777 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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