In the past, clothes were being worn by people as a symbol of their culture, which has changed a lot over the decades. Due to globalization, people are tending to accept those clothes which are commonly worn throughout the world. I believe, this has much more good effect which outweighs the drawback quite easily.
It is undeniably true that there are some drawbacks to this tendency because it may lead to disappearing of the uniqueness of a nation. Traditional clothes always represent the heritage, beliefs, tradition and roots of a nation or race or entire country. While people are obsessed with the global brand, they have less interest in their cultural heritage. As a result, a country may face the extinction of their own tradition permanently.
However, I believe that there are more positive sides than negative in order to prefer similar clothes. Firstly, It has an important role to eradicate discrimination to other people culture or tradition. Such As, if all people wear the same clothes, no one can make fun of clothes. For instance, In Africa, there are many tribes who wear traditional dresses which are quite different than the modern world. By wearing those clothes, if they decide to come to any international events, some people will eventually make trolls of them. Secondly, these clothes are less expensive, which makes it affordable to all levels of people. Furthermore, this tendency is economically profitable for 3rd world countries. For instance, Bangladesh, Srilanka and India have plenty of ready-made garment industry, from where companies like H&M, Zara collect shirts, Jeans pants to fulfill the growing demands of these cloths. Hence, people from these countries are getting a job and become financially stable, which resulting in economic development for the entire country.
In Conclusion, Replacing traditional clothes with global common dresses may have some consequences, but to adopt the modern era, there are no questions about the role of wearing similar clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78248391468 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1434036987 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326192353302 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930978050574 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613051752429 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173586028872 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884274753607 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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