Advantages and Disadvantages about online shopping.
The world increasingly developed. Machines, factory, condisoner, all thing around us are an evidenceof that. Currently, activity like shopoping people don't need to go out anymore but they still can buy things because most people are ecommerce.ONline shopping help our life more convinence, usually online items will be sold at much cheaper prices than on market.Online shppoing is still very dangerous, the items on that not always high quality and you cannot control your money.
Foremost, when you buy an item on online stores, you only need to speed a little time to selecting the item that you want to buy then press the the purchase button on your phone and you just wait a minutes for the item to arrive at your house door. This will be the best option for those who are always busy with work. Not only that, the items on oline store usually cheaper than because mostly em commerce sellers not need their own shop, this mean they don not need to speed to much money on building a company or a shop to establish their brand. Online shopping also often given their customer a voucher or a coupons. Whatever the items was cheap, it make the customer felt they was profit when they are buying things online. Therefore, that is why many choose ecommerce.
Although online shopping is good, it also vey daner. The items are not awlays high quality, like when you are buy a fan on the online stores and you just read a product descriptions that you buy qand i think that are only the benefits of the product. It tempting you like when you go to the supoermarket and smell the breadsmell, it make you want to buy it. Whatever, when you receive the fan is you sure it is a good quality. How long do you think you will use it when it is not a good quality product? If the items that you buy is the lower quality product, you think you can refund the items, of course not the seller will not refund the items for you.Ecommerce is a daner of money. When you buying things and pay money for the things you buy by credict card, what do you think if the seller take doulble of money that you pay for the items that you buy.You think you will be refunded your money by tellingthe homepage about that. If it is the prestage website, they will refunded the money for you, but if it is not a prestage website, you will not get any benefit for you about that.
Online shopping is helpful for us , especially for busy people because it save time and save money. Whatever, online shopping also bring trouble for you like : lost money and got lower quality product. Ecommerce are beneficial and also harmful so every must pay attention when doing online shopping.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rrently, activity like shopoping people dont need to go out anymore but they still c...
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Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Online
...d at much cheaper prices than on market.Online shppoing is still very dangerous, the i...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...he item that you want to buy then press the the purchase button on your phone and you j...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...he item that you want to buy then press the the purchase button on your phone and you j...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a minute' or simply 'minutes'?
Suggestion: a minute; minutes
... button on your phone and you just wait a minutes for the item to arrive at your house do...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...p, this mean they don not need to speed to much money on building a company or a s...
^^
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a coupon' or simply 'coupons'?
Suggestion: a coupon; coupons
...often given their customer a voucher or a coupons. Whatever the items was cheap, it make ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...upons. Whatever the items was cheap, it make the customer felt they was profit when ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... product descriptions that you buy qand i think that are only the benefits of the...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...poermarket and smell the breadsmell, it make you want to buy it. Whatever, when you ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ecommerce
...eller will not refund the items for you.Ecommerce is a daner of money. When you buying th...
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Line 5, column 858, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...that you pay for the items that you buy.You think you will be refunded your money b...
^^^
Line 5, column 976, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'refund'
Suggestion: refund
...f it is the prestage website, they will refunded the money for you, but if it is not a p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at. Online shopping is helpful for us , especially for busy people because it s...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
..., especially for busy people because it save time and save money. Whatever, online s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 7.48453608247 321% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 3.03092783505 693% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 32.9175257732 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 937.175257732 232% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 481.0 206.0 233% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51767151767 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 3.78020617076 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32121661764 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 127.690721649 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449064449064 0.622605031667 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 290.88556701 234% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5754637732 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.65 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.05 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113100976171 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530428505814 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065101000644 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106394717483 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448676035186 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rrently, activity like shopoping people dont need to go out anymore but they still c...
^^^^
Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Online
...d at much cheaper prices than on market.Online shppoing is still very dangerous, the i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...he item that you want to buy then press the the purchase button on your phone and you j...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...he item that you want to buy then press the the purchase button on your phone and you j...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a minute' or simply 'minutes'?
Suggestion: a minute; minutes
... button on your phone and you just wait a minutes for the item to arrive at your house do...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...p, this mean they don not need to speed to much money on building a company or a s...
^^
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a coupon' or simply 'coupons'?
Suggestion: a coupon; coupons
...often given their customer a voucher or a coupons. Whatever the items was cheap, it make ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...upons. Whatever the items was cheap, it make the customer felt they was profit when ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... product descriptions that you buy qand i think that are only the benefits of the...
^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...poermarket and smell the breadsmell, it make you want to buy it. Whatever, when you ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ecommerce
...eller will not refund the items for you.Ecommerce is a daner of money. When you buying th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 858, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...that you pay for the items that you buy.You think you will be refunded your money b...
^^^
Line 5, column 976, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'refund'
Suggestion: refund
...f it is the prestage website, they will refunded the money for you, but if it is not a p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at. Online shopping is helpful for us , especially for busy people because it s...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
..., especially for busy people because it save time and save money. Whatever, online s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 7.48453608247 321% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 3.03092783505 693% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 32.9175257732 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 937.175257732 232% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 481.0 206.0 233% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51767151767 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 3.78020617076 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32121661764 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 127.690721649 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449064449064 0.622605031667 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 290.88556701 234% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5754637732 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.65 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.05 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113100976171 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530428505814 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065101000644 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106394717483 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448676035186 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.