Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
"Hero" is the term that the kudos for any performer in the society. It very difficult to manage this kudos for long time for any performer. In today’s society, it is difficult to regard any living man or women as hero. In this pragmatic society, the great performer in his own field is considered as hero and idole. Many of them are pretty good in his field but fail to manage in social life. Still there are some great people whom society considers as hero.
Best suitable example is Sachin Tendulkar. He is the god of cricket for entire cricket world. He gave his consistence performance in cri...
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The flaws are your weaknesses, like in this essay:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.938 21.0 means you need to have more compound or complex sentences.
Sentence Length SD: 5.528 7.5 -- Sentence Length SD is low means that your essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length.
In your another essay, the flaw is No. of Different Words: 146 200, means you need to have more different words.
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flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.528 7.5
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 32 15
No. of Words: 446 350
No. of Characters: 2128 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.596 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.771 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.528 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.451 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.153 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5